The Electronics Deli

This test is designed to be comprehensive yet accessible for younger ESL learners, covering basic grammar, vocabulary, and writing skills. It allows students to express themselves on familiar topics while demonstrating their language proficiency. The test’s effectiveness can be gauged through careful evaluation and feedback from the students and examiners. Regular updates and adjustments based on this feedback will ensure that the test remains relevant and effective.

ESL Writing Test for Ages 8-11

Instructions for Students:

• Answer each question to the best of your ability.
• Write clearly and use complete sentences.
• You have 60 minutes to complete this test.

Part 1: Short Answer Responses (20 minutes)

1. What is your favorite animal and why?
2. Describe your family.
3. What do you like to do on the weekend?
4. Tell us about your best friend.
5. What is your favorite subject in school?\

Part 2: Paragraph Writing (20 minutes)

• Topic: Write a paragraph about a memorable day you had. Describe what happened, who was there, and why it was memorable.

Part 3: Simple Narrative Essay (20 minutes)

• Topic: Write a short story about a time you helped someone or someone helped you. What happened? How did it make you feel?

Instructions for Examiners:

• Use the provided scoring guide to evaluate the students’ responses.
• Pay attention to grammar, vocabulary, and coherence in Part 1 and Part 2.
• In Part 3, focus on the content, creativity, and organization of the essay.
• Provide feedback to help students understand areas of strength and improvement.

Simplified Scoring Guide:

Scoring Guide for ESL Writing Test

Section	Criteria	Score (Out of 10)	Examiner’s Notes
Short Answer	Grammar & Vocabulary
	Coherence
Paragraph Writing	Organization
	Grammar & Vocabulary
	Coherence
Essay Writing	Content & Creativity
	Organization
	Grammar & Vocabulary
Total Score		/30

Instructions for Examiners:

• Evaluate each criterion on a scale of 1-10, considering the age and proficiency level.
• Provide brief notes or feedback in the “Examiner’s Notes” section for each criterion.
• Total the scores for a final assessment out of 30.
• Use the notes section for any additional observations or recommendations.

Note: The scoring guide is designed to be user-friendly, allowing examiners to quickly assess each student’s performance while providing valuable feedback. The guide’s effectiveness can be enhanced through periodic reviews and adjustments based on actual usage and feedback from examiners.